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1/15/2018 0 Comments

Tone

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The attitude a writer takes toward the subject of a work--differs from mood in that this is what the writer intends while mood is what the reader experiences.  Tone is revealed through the writer's diction (word choice), figurative language, and structure.  Look for it here:

I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King, Jr.

Puzzle by S.M.(M).L.

Peaceful and wise
beaded and brave
this piece at the center
held it together
dark hair with a feather
all dressed in leather
the strong nations
to whom we're all
indebted for home.

Hard-talking and working
pale and strong
this piece came looking
for a life beyond rule,
separation of church
and state.  Wanted different,
a safe haven, one nation,
indivisible, created equal,
but all takes time to be meant.

Stolen and chained
beautiful and brown
this piece didn't choose
this life.  Found strength
deep inside with pride
and the help of but half
a nation to alter the course
of history.  Even then,
not part of the all until
future generations can heal.

Still more come crossing
borders or waters
to seek out a new way.
At times the way is open,
at others it is closed, but 
always what is new is peered
at through narrowed eyes.

Forced to assimilate
reduced to stereotype
nothing left to cling to
nothing left that makes
sense because making
cents is all that is left.
Criticized for being
critical of capitalism,
but it's left each of us 
with the same questions. 

You are not me, and I
am not you, and we've got
to get to where that's just
fine.  We've seen ounces
of greatness from each
and every nation and
all had the same answer.

From Thoreau to Gandhi
to King to Yousafzai,
look to their kindness,
look in your heart for
courage to stand alone
together in a world
that hasn't changed
as much as it could.

We're selfish and empty
preferring entertainment
over empathy because if
you see me for who I am,
and I see you, no longer
assuming but actually 
knowing we can interlock
our hands and really
mean that gesture to 
hold us together.

It's what makes us different
that matters the most.
Despite our sameness,
our love, hope, and fear,
it's the beliefs about them
that make them so clear.
Each culture carries them
in their own way and there's
where we've got to get back to.

Individually we're broken
what's within is bent
and won't fit. Without
heritage were lost on
the table. Instead of making
each piece exactly the same,
we've got to come together
in our own way to feel at
peace with this home 
in the making.  No more pushing
or shoving to get it together
and let's forget edges to let
more in looking for a place.

Rounded and smoothed
we don't fit together,
better left with ragged edges
not forced into blandness
because the pretty picture
doesn't make sense when
it's covered in blood.

When the gunshots fire,
let's look and listen to ourselves.
Let's not cower in the corner
looking outward rather than in.
Each time we ignore, we are open
to more, we have to admit it's gone
wrong.  We can swipe away pieces,
point fingers and blame, but it still
won't come together as it should.

In this moment, not the next, stop
telling the same story.  It's a must
to be different, to accept the hurts,
and the happiness of the past.  It won't
be the same, because it's never really
been changed, the pieces have always 
been there. Let's shift our thinking,
stop beating our heads, and put our hearts
​back together instead.
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    S.M.(M).L.

    There's a poet in my soul; she's always been there, but is often neglected.  I'm letting her out here.  I hope you will too.  Here's some unsolicited advice:  When your poet speaks to you, just let it out, there's something there, I promise you.  Here you'll find ideas about how to hone your craft as I practice mine and lead you to some of my favorite published poems and poets.  

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